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I received artwork from Kodak to use foir the sign design on the front of the building. The artwork did not work out to what the customer has for room so we made some changes. Let me know your expertise on which one you like. The building has not been painted yet it will be a butterscotch back ground or dark blue. http://www.freshink.net/color.html thanks for your input. Doug Downey www.freshink.net
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I like version 4 & 5. Can't decided between the blue and red on those.
A while back you recommended a book to me on Corel Draw. Since then, I had a computer crash and lost the title. Would you mind sending it again! Thanks! Nice work.
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Doug, I like #4 also, but I do think that the words "Image Check" are a little too squashed. Kinda hard to read.......Wait a minute......did I just critique a design by Doug Downey? Am I nuts? Great work, Doug.
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I'll vote #4 too. Couple things bug me though... although "I" like the way you altered the image check logo it kinda breaks marketing concistancy (sp?) if every sign guy made it look the way they thought it would look best. And I'll check my speck book again but I think the word Kodak is always suppose to be red on yellow. Being a stones throw from Kodak park and doing lots of work for them I've learned not to tweak some things... even if they needed it. I like your tweaks though
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My thoughts also when it comes to corporate dealings, I usally do not screw around with it BUT! This is one of the first stores around of its kind and if you saw the way the artwork was created for sign manufacturing you would just laugh! There was not a straight letter and in the first layout you see you can see a couple of letter do not even fill in. They should be ashamed of what they sent! That's why I screwed with it. You can see the word "plus" that they used dosen't suit any of the design elements! Anyway it is a thought and it still has to be seen by them for Ok. I thank you for all your input.
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