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Posted by whitey2 (Member # 1265) on :
 
This an Ad for my local phone book, just like to get your comments - criticisms

Thanks in advance

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Neil White
Sign Magic
Melton, VIC
Australia
whitey@primus.com.au
 

Posted by J.T. Gazaway (Member # 2001) on :
 
It might just be that I'm in Texas, but I like it. I like it a lot. Good job!

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J.T. Gazaway
J.T. Graphic Design
www.jt-graphicdesign.com
jt@jt-graphicdesign.com

 

Posted by Barry Branscum (Member # 445) on :
 
1. I lIKE IT!!

2. ONE CRITIQUE: I think the NAME is a little weak...how 'bout a BOLDER font for your name?

3. ONE QUESTION: Can the phone book do your colors justice? they are very limited here.

thas' all I have to say!

GOOD work!
Barry

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Master's Touch Signs & Screenprinting
Clinton AR
5017456246
ICQ 17430008
"Imagine the Possibilities..."



 

Posted by Doug Downey (Member # 829) on :
 
Great artwork Neil!

I have the same concern...first your company name is weak and you have the colours backwards. White is the dominant colour and the gold/yellow should be used for the secondary copy.

Doug Downey
www.freshink.net

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Freshink Creative Design Group
376 Romeo, Street
Stratford, ON N5A 4T9
 



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